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Committer:
Tim McNamara
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Date:
2010-03-20 04:13:29 UTC
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Revision ID:
paperless@timmcnamara.co.nz-20100320041329-ikcxbktl3dg5o7tj
Edited introductory paragraphs
Actions & justifications:
"New to Ubuntu?"
Removed redundancy in "New to Ubuntu"?
Appeared twice: once in header, then in first sentence
Expanded the first sentance into listitems
Attempted to use more of the page, so the contents didn't
have such a visually dominating effect.
"Welcome to Ubuntu"
Spread content out to two sentences
There were two messages. One was about Ubuntu, the other
was about getting new software. This commit provides a
visual seperation, so that the messages are clearer.