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  • Committer: Tim McNamara
  • Date: 2010-03-20 04:13:29 UTC
  • Revision ID: paperless@timmcnamara.co.nz-20100320041329-ikcxbktl3dg5o7tj
Edited introductory paragraphs

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"New to Ubuntu?"
  Removed redundancy in "New to Ubuntu"?
    Appeared twice: once in header, then in first sentence
  Expanded the first sentance into listitems
    Attempted to use more of the page, so the contents didn't
    have such a visually dominating effect.

"Welcome to Ubuntu"
  Spread content out to two sentences
    There were two messages. One was about Ubuntu, the other
    was about getting new software. This commit provides a
    visual seperation, so that the messages are clearer.

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