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Committer:
Evan Dandrea
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Date:
2012-06-19 09:04:24 UTC
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mfrom:
(5506.1.2 3d-graphics-text)
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Revision ID:
evan.dandrea@canonical.com-20120619090424-cipn2i0vit70zlcv
* Improvements to the third-party software text:
- Changes "display" to "play" (since MP3 is about audio, not video).
- Adds mention of graphics drivers (because the installer may install a
Nvidia proprietary driver).
- Changes "wireless" to "wi-fi".
- Changes "closed-source" to "proprietary", matching Ubuntu Software
Center.
- Removes repetition of "the software", by changing "the software's
documentation" to "its documentation".